Nanohorror

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I'm part of a Facebook 'Nanofiction' group and thought it'd be fun to apply it to horror. The rules are that you have 50 words in which to write an entire, self-contained horror story. No more, no less...the title isn't part of the word count.

Here's my attempt:

That Child

More screams.
“That child,” sighs Sue, “should be put down.”
I roll my eyes sympathetically.
The screams continue.

At last, I snap.
During a lull, I stride into the near-empty carriage.
A broken, pulpy dollthing lies accusingly across two seats.
Aghast, I understand.
They were screams for help.

C'mon guys...any more?
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Ooh nicely done there. I might have a lil' go later.
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Okay here's my little ditty. Wrote a real short story, thought "YES" easy. Then realised it was over 100 words. Phew, this is tough. Finally trimmed it down and got to 50 dead on.

The stories title is 'Big in Japan'.

She glanced at the clock. Time moved inexplicably slowly and yet her mind raced with awful possibilities. her bound wrists chafed and rivulets of blood dripped from her finely manicured nails. She stared into her captors eyes - only glistening amusement there - she flinched. As the demon teased his stiffening penis.
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I like it :)

Just one thing...I don't get what the title refers to? The demon c*ck?
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scrobble wrote:I like it :)

Just one thing...I don't get what the title refers to? The demon c*ck?
Nah it's a jokey reference to hentai. Kinda gives you a litle heads up on what's coming. :shock:
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